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Dear guy at table 3,

We ordered the same latte chillers two days ago, yesterday and today as I'm writing this. I can't stop looking at you, with your purple headphones peeking out from your pin straight, bronze hair. Your stares intrigue me because I wonder, are you challenging me? Bad choice because evidently, I will stare back even after you look away. I like the way you scribble your words across the napkins you sneak under your cup from the baskets and stick them into your pocket before anyone [but me] sees.
I wonder, do you keep them? What are you writing that's so different? 'Walk with paper maybe next time' they'd say but I think its interesting.
I'm still looking at you by the way. You're probably thinking I'm a weird girl who thinks you're cute or something. Truth be told, your eyes are pulling me in. For the past two days they looked different. I find myself smiling when you're singing along to your music and thinking no one can hear you.

Well, this napkin is getting full so I'll conclude here.

p.s next time, you should get an extra shot of syrup, it really helps.

Walking East,
The girl drawing on her wrists

30 day letter challenge
Suggested by Ginger up there =P

I kinda felt warm writing this one <3
I could do with a coffee shop right now.
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onerasers Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
I love this so much.
Just... everything about it, I think, so I am not sure what to say here.
This letter reminds me of how it feels to fall in love with strangers, and I know it might be missing the point, but I used to do it quite a lot. And writing in napkins, to me, sort of seems like the most noble choice in the world at times.
Unfolding them, later, seems to talk of joy&worth&memories.
But... well. This is what I have to offer, from relating to it.
And, once more, I think I'm truly in love with this.
You have a beautiful way with words.
Thanks a whole lot for sharing.

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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
oh wow
this is soooo old haha
:hug: really, i love people's perceptions of my writings so it's open ^^
and yes, napkin writing somehow looks...unique. :heart:
thank you so so much. i really appreciate it
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onerasers Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
you are very much welcome. :hug:
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Sub3r3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
this was a very good read. it feels so direct and truthful. so sincere. I wish all your words are this sincere
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
=) I think all my words are sincere haha
thank you ^^
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Seishinijoushamegami Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Omfg I actually kinda feel teary eyed after reading that. Idk why. DX It's so sweet and kinda heart breaking even though you don't know the end for them. Do they get together? Do they leave and never look back? Omfg it's gonna bug me forever now... :'( You should write a story for this! OR a song! :D
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
:lmao: :huggle: hahaha that...was the most amazing comment I've ever gotten :heart: thank you so so much and for the fave as well ^^. Here's what...just for you...I'll write an ending or something one day when I get the time :]
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Seishinijoushamegami Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Aww, thank you. <333 ^^ And you're welcome. But it kind of reminded me of Tegami by Angela Aki. She wrote letters in it and stuff and she's talking to her adult self and her adult self is giving her hope and advice even thought it's many years later. It's in Japanese but it's really sweet and when you can understand it, it makes you kinda wanna cry, too. :')
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
oh nice. maybe you can link me? :)
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Seishinijoushamegami Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
:) Sure thing. ^^

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It has the English and Romaji lyrics in the Info lol
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